Lucifera Santez

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Inhibition - Poem by Lucifera Santez

In all my days
I thought I knew you
But when you went away
I still miss you
With all your lies
All your dreamy promises
You still wreck my heart
Even when you are dead…………………………………………..
Was it all a lie?
Your enchanting words and loving smiles
Was everything a deception?
To humiliate me to feed your own perfection
I was a fool from the start
And honey you being you
Broke my heart
And I was left to repent
All the sins you did
All the promises you broke
And I kept worshiping you as my sun
Now you have been gone
And it has been so long
Yet my heart breaks
For all I ever gave you
And the feelings you didn’t reciprocate
And I have to live with it all
I guess my love set me up for this treacherous fall.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote it for my friend virginia.

Comments about Inhibition by Lucifera Santez

  • Khairul Ahsan (10/20/2015 8:01:00 AM)

    I was deeply touched and moved while I was reading this poem. Unrequited love is often a painful memory, but this one seems to have surpassed all as the victim feels the pinch so sorely even after the death of her lover:
    'You still wreck my heart
    Even when you are dead' - So sad!
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  • Mark Dillon (8/11/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Great write. Love so wonderful and yet can be so painful. (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    very sad.................... (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/18/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    A poem of unrequited love - very sad. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

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