Black Roses Poem by Lucifera Santez

Black Roses

Rating: 4.8


Color of darkness,
Hue of sorrow,
Shade of pain,
Embodied in that bloom,
One that he has
Created from his tears,
From his blood,
For her,
Only for her,
In remembrance of their
Broken promises,
Blooming in his garden,
The flowers of dead love,
Adorned with the scars
Of a shattered heart,
Flourish those black roses.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

what a perfect imagery of your black roses your words so amazing even this is a sadness poem brilliant..! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2013

Black roses symbolizing love that has died - very imaginative, and a great write.

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Hazel Durham 15 August 2013

A sad story beautifully written with such passion and understanding at his pain and sorrow! ! Superb wtite! !

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Subarna Chakraborty 17 August 2013

It's an good love poem, an awesome poetic expression that you have.Brilliant!

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Alookh (matin) 18 August 2013

oh...i'll remember ur poem whenever i see a black roes after this...lovely. :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 August 2018

What a lovely poem, beautiful though painful sentiments.

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C. P. Sharma 13 October 2015

I appreciate your lovely ingenuity in images. Keep it up.

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Ken E Hall 08 February 2014

original poem how love can be turned into a black void seen as a black rose with shades of pain well done indeed...regards

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Tony Karas 01 December 2013

Whooooaaaaaa! Powerful! Girl.... you are awesome!

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Roseann Shawiak 01 December 2013

Love your expression of dead love. It's dark with a lot of meaning. I especially liked the last line: the flowers of dead love, adorned with the scars of a shattered heart, flourish those black roses. Keep writing. Thank you for your comment on my poem: Being Bereft, I greatly appreciated it. RoseAnn

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