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Innocence

Rating: 4.6
Innocence stolen without my permission
Innocence gone without my submission

Innocence lost through another's plan
Innocence no longer for another man

Innocence turned to hatred and fear
Innocence gone, no man can come near

Innocence taken from a little girls heart
Innocence replaced by mistrust, you thought you were smart
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COMMENTS
Lisa Andress 01 June 2020
i felt the tears falling as I read this, it was as if the writer had been shedding tears as this was written thank you for sharing
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Leslie Philibert 05 December 2014
OK, but spoiled by the spelling error (disappears is correct) , careful poets check their work. Rhymed poetry needs lines of the same length, so the fourth verse doesn`t work, and the repeated first word tires the reader. And you should write little girl`s heart, you need the genitive.
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Patricia Grantham 05 December 2014
A simple but beautiful poem on innocence. When lost is very hard to regain. But life must go on. Good.
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Kim Barney 05 December 2014
Well expressed, full of emotion.
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Jeannette Heywood 05 December 2014
Beautifully written Mandi this poem about the theft of physical innocence. The innocence of the soul though remains intact.
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Rajnish Manga 05 December 2014
I am so excited to read this poem, Mandi, and how well you have explained the disappearance of innocence- Innocence disappears like dew in the sun. Thank you very much.10 out of 10.
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 December 2014
Innocence dissapears like dew in the sun Innocence faded before it's begun very nice and congrats
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A great poem on innocence and it liked.
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D.l. Aceves 22 December 2013
Good poem. [dissapears] should be [disappears] though.
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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2013
Lost innocence is irreplaceable. People who smear it are but animals. The pains of losing 'innocence' eloquently expressed.10/10 from me.
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