Inspiration Poem by obed Souza

A very inspiring write, you have put the bible to good use in this poem, 10 Lynda xx

this is great! you put the bible to its full use in your poetry. i had just put my poem called ' inspiation' on line also. YOURS DESERVES A DOUBLE TEN

beautifully penned, as if you were present at the creation. My favorite lines: 'Inhabit this empty heart The breath of your spirit: The deep made Eden. '

When there was nothing, there was God. He is the creater of being-ness. Very inspirational write, Obed.

God is always the inspiration to light on this world! ! ! profound composition...Thanks! ! !

You have aptly captured the spirit of the Bible. Good work. 'Words lie there formless, dead'. 'Dead' is not true. What is not yet within our power of cognitive level need not be dead. It is only a stage of non-clarity from our level of perception. In oriental philosophy, this stage of non-clarity is coined as 'Avyaktha'. 'Vyaktha' is clarity. We have to understand that before the evolution of languages, there was man and his thoughts that implies the fact that for our thinking, language is not necessary. The primitive man heard the voices of this Nature in various moods and forms and began associating these forms of sounds to forms of Nature. These forms of sound later evolved into words and man associated these words to corresponding forms and ideas. For example, the word 'stream' has been evolved from the very voice of a stream. The primitive man clearly heard this voice. Another example - 'Crow'. Haven't you noticed the very cry of a crow - 'cra', 'cra'...

nice prosaic poem, a lovely ode to The Lord....10+++++

Obed: This is a very good poem. It's always an inspiration when we have God in the Equasion. See ya Lynn

God's Inspiration becomes His Creation. An imaginative piece inspired by the Book of Genesis.

a great ambition in apt words. wonderful. shan