somewhere in a deep forest
away from the prying eye
there i found a corner
for you and me
one day the passers-by
will find creepers wound
on us bearing fruit and flower
with strange roots
sustaining us
come my love,
let's shun this
sterile wilderness
and give our soul
the place where it
rightfully belongs
02oct2009
09.16hrs
into another wilderness makes me feel on top of the universe.Very good.
very beautiful love packed wilderness I loved it regards sandhya
'sterile wilderness! ! ! ! ! ' Wow what a fruitful writing.........flowery expression.........u took me to another world........
A lovely piece Indira...I agree with everyone's comments..the ending is brilliant
Evocative of escaping into another dimension. Imaginative and delicate.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is astoundingly delicately beautiful, Indira!