Into Another Wilderness Poem by indira babbellapati
Into Another Wilderness
somewhere in a deep forest
away from the prying eye
there i found a corner
for you and me
one day the passers-by
will find creepers wound
on us bearing fruit and flower
with strange roots
sustaining us
come my love,
let's shun this
sterile wilderness
and give our soul
the place where it
rightfully belongs
02oct2009
09.16hrs
'....give our soul the place it rightfully belongs ' Excellent Ending! I wonder if at all I could do justice to my soul even for a moment! A sweet 10.
very beautiful love packed wilderness I loved it regards sandhya
into another wilderness makes me feel on top of the universe.Very good.
'sterile wilderness! ! ! ! ! ' Wow what a fruitful writing.........flowery expression.........u took me to another world........
A lovely piece Indira...I agree with everyone's comments..the ending is brilliant
Evocative of escaping into another dimension. Imaginative and delicate.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 11:21:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
well, words aren't enough to describe this poem. its wonderful. different, yet so obvious! loved it ma'am. thank you.