Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 386,449 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Invisible Love - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dear Ocean of love in love you build,
With affection to universe you yield.
Field we get to stand with home run,
For lighting world wheel you tell sun.

By your command wind does dandle,
Father you are more to us you fondle.
Many ask how do you do this invisible,
They think and search in space unable.

Your thoughts vibrate us to get a boon,
Although we do not see we get it soon.
Unlimited strength comes to path show
Colours are spread in both sides rainbow.

Plants grow with touch of nature of rain
Leaves shake green grasses give of pain.
We hold in palms many memories of us,
You do shine in devotion ever in life thus.

Wonder creation you arrange dark matter,
Planets move in space there in far better.
Moon falls with calmness on the dark night,
Only your love father motivates in way right.

Light falls in life while we know souls we are,
Far sky smiles with love of sun dazzles star.
Invisible rope of love is spread across creation,
Oh father this binds all by power of emotion.

Topic(s) of this poem: Love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

"Dear Ocean of love, everything you build in love in this universe. Due to affection you yield this universe. We get filed to stand and run with home to stay. You only tell sun for lighting world drama wheel. Wind dandles by your command. You more fondle us because you are father. Many ask themselves that how do you do this really in invisible condition. They think more and search about to see even in space. But they become unable to do so. Vibration of your thoughts takes us towards getting a boon. We get it soon although we do not see it. To show the path, unlimited strength comes. In both sides of rainbow colours are spread. With touch of nature of rain plants grow. Leaves of plants shake green grasses and give up pain. Many memories of us we hold in palms. Thus in life you ever shine in our devotion. You arrange dark matter and your creation is really wonderful. In far better way there in space planets move. On the dark night moon falls with calmness. Only your love oh father motivates us in right way. While we know that we are souls at that time light falls in life. With love of sun far sky smiles and star dazzles. Across the creation invisible rope of love is spread. Oh father, this binds all of us with power of emotion." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.

Comments about Invisible Love by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Mahtab Bangalee (10/31/2018 10:50:00 PM)

    its really interesting poem- poet tried to get the pure love from nature, the best source of love /// great effort (Report)Reply

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  • (11/8/2014 2:50:00 PM)

    This is a very soothing and spiritual breath of fresh air, it calms the soul while refreshing the mind with this invisible love. I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you for sharing it, and thank you for reading and commenting on my poem: Seeing Leaves Dangle, I appreciate it. RoseAnn (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/31/2014 1:19:00 AM)

    Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.


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  • Soumita Sarkar (10/27/2014 1:13:00 AM)

    Brilliant...spirituality drips through each line................liked it..thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Brian Johnston (10/24/2014 11:56:00 AM)

    Although your English lacks the polish of a native speaker Kumarmani, your thoughts shine through. You do have a gift that I hope you will continue to exercise. I suspect you will really like the poems in the last contest I sponsored on my web site. Look for my poem there too called God''s Kind of Poetry.

    I especially liked

    'Colours are spread in both sides rainbow' and

    'Far sky smiles with love of sun dazzles star.'

    There are two groups of poems you should check out that will introduce you to some great poets on this site. Check out these poem titles on my site....

    'A Challenge Title Contest - 2014 Sept Entries - The Winners, '

    'A Challenge Title Contest - 2014 Sept Entries- The Poems - (Disqualified but Noteworthy) ', and

    'A Challenge Title Contest - 2014 Sept Entries - PoetrySoup Winners 10 of 12'

    And consider writing a poem for the contest now in progress with a title of 'Words - The Heart of Imagination.'

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 24, 2014

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