Is My Life Counting Poem by Tia Maria

Is My Life Counting

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Where am I headed
Am I heading in the right direction
I heard there is no such thing as freedom
If not working to keep that freedom

Speaking to my heart I ask
What is it am I sowing
One certain principle to live by in life
To be sure if one's life is counting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Kempson 23 August 2009

All life counts Tia, if you believe then the world is your oyster and you the pearl that graces it 10 Daniel

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Lynda Robson 23 August 2009

A very honest write, which poses many questions, sometimes I let fate lend a helping hand, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm 23 August 2009

Good questions Tia and they need asking - - lives can count in so many ways..... small ways sometimes are very needed....10 for this honest appraisal of what counts. - - love from Fay.

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Aron Lelei 23 August 2009

Life is so precious and wherever one heads, leads to one destination.One has to be careful to which direction the face faces. Monitor your heart and ask it, Is this the right direction? Short poem but nice.

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