It Is A Secret Is It Inside My Head...It Is Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

It Is A Secret Is It Inside My Head...It Is

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It is every possible solution
thought out inside twice
because it to you is simple
it is not to me is it
It is a simple walk to the store
is it
it is not
it is a journey into fifty paths
is it a strait line crossing it
is it another line crossing this
it is as simple as laying it down
straightening the s into the i
and making a perfect circle with
room left over to make a rest area
then is speeds off to make it another.
Reading me makes you slow way down doesn't) it(.: . :)
It is o.k.....I miss you is all...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkness Everywhere 03 May 2009

good poem keep writing

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well expressed poem

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<font color =fusha>Amy 18 April 2009

great poem gd to read

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 18 April 2009

Reading you makes me interested, if I slow down it's to read your mind - you have a flair unique and I thank you for asking me in...Cindy

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 April 2009

A variety of style of expression. Reads good and sweet.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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