.jealousy Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

.jealousy

Rating: 4.6


Jealousy haunts golden lily,
Watching the riverside lady,
Angelic ebullient eyes unwary
Of the orchids stare and envy;

Rose no match for pink lips,
Nor it’s dangling stocks,
Nearest to her comely hips,
Nor the swaying buttocks;

Lotus feels quail and nervous,
Whenever lady is amorous,
As her cheek turns rosy pink,
Making lotus flinch and shrink

Saturday, June 7, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: jealousy,pink
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vanessa Svaleson 14 June 2008

it is great i like everything sways

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Melvina Germain 13 June 2008

Your heart portrays such beauty, elegant words speak in such a sweet tone.

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Prasetya Utama 13 June 2008

nice metaphora and beautiful picture of your heart!

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Nice poem. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Dereck Gibbs 12 June 2008

the imagery in this poem is truly amazing. and the flow is great too. a wonderful piece

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

lol! ! very nice........

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

nice poem. metamorphic and picturesque--complete with lily, orchid, rose and lotus. 10 points to you

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Mamta Agarwal 27 June 2008

lovely, great metaphor 10for this picturesque piece of writing,

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Moushumi moushumi 16 June 2008

we could continue on & on. But that's the stop point to be mesmerised by this poem where it stops. A great metaphor still haunts me without any word to say...pl keep on sharing such poems for me.

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Neha Aradhye 15 June 2008

ekdam sahi... :) :) :)

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