Jharokha Comments

Lovely...really enjoyed the read. Each stanza most enjoyable. Most certainly a 10/10

Kya baat hai...bahut sunder rachna.

Bohot khoob! I enjoyd dis, my urdu is similar to yor hindi so i likd dis nice nazm.

beautifully described emotions and feelings, in the images of Nature

Parvat k uche sikhar asman ko chhune ka prayas Peaks of mountains' relentless effort to touch the sky...Beautifully described heart's deep desire (dilka jharoka) . Thank you for expressing various aspects in beautiful Hindi.

i will add your lines for final print

Beautiful lines.. Jiske kabra me uski hariyali dafan ho jaati hai....Wonderful poem..Loved reading it.. Har manjar per kahin na khin thikana hota hai... Hum usse talashte rahein idhar udhar per woh hamare saamne he tha.. Loved it.