Jisei Poem by Rob Lamberton

Jisei

Rating: 5.0


I once wrote a poem about demise
They kept looking at me

Friday, February 3, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 February 2023

Top score for this gripping two liner.........+ to my fav

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 February 2023

Stunning poem Rob. Death watching you does bring so many emotions with strong impact.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

death is the funny gist of the living discussion!

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Rob Lamberton 05 February 2023

A very clever and thought provoking response!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2023

Sensitive topics like death could grip any reader. So succinct yet with great impact. Very thought provoking too.

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Rob Lamberton 04 February 2023

Yes. True of death but also has a broader application like the "death" of a relationship or the "demise" of sound reasoning and judgment.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 03 February 2023

All those Jiseis? Interesting. One more you write. They would only continue eyeing you

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Rob Lamberton 04 February 2023

dem eyes!

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