Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Joint Family - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Joint family culture now days not found
It was ideal and was placed very sound
It has made long full circle and round
Now it has disappeared and lost ground

Is it losing its original charm and magic?
They used to provide good humor and comic
There is no immediate solution and remedy
Family remains in tension without any comedy

The economic burden is taking heavy toll
Old people find it very difficult to stroll
Limited space and mobility makes them venerable
They feel neglected and lead the life miserable

How much trouble parents face for bringing their children?
Without kids their life seems sultry and barren
Parents still go for all out efforts to over come
All difficulties they bear with happy face and welcome

The phase is reversed with change of trend
Children grow up with so much to mend
They find it difficult to continue with old
Go for immediate change with old items to be sold

Overnights the parents have become unwanted
Their presence is not liked and unwarranted
They want to have their own world with freedom
They seemed to have run out of wisdom

It is irony of fact that we have run out of courtesy
How can we forget their efforts and majesty?
Do we confine our selves to feel only pity?
Is it the only way to face the situation or reality?

Old people are sometimes pushed to the wall
They are simply shunted from home or hall
Where to go and how to live is only concern?
They tend to forget that tomorrow will be their turn

We need to think in right prospective
Their plight should be considered as subjective
We are not inhuman or live in stage primitive
Deep concern should be made and efforts to revive


We must develop sound mechanism
It should be considered best humanism
Nothing can substitute for good gesture
They are not our past but best future

They should be considered as national heritage
Why we should neglect them because of old age?
They should have all their dues and respect
We need to pay attention and introspect

They have parted everything for our betterment
We should look after out them for good treatment
We should do it as matter of self respect and pride
It should form basis and not attempted to hide

History will not pardon us if we fail on this count
You will not be at ease and heavy pressure will mount
Nothing will go well if they are made to suffer
How can we afford joy if we have nothing to offer?


Comments about Joint Family by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (7/4/2010 11:38:00 PM)


    Joint family culture now days not found
    It was ideal and was placed very sound
    It has made long full circle and round
    Now it has disappeared and lost ground
    it is sign of unity....10
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (1/30/2010 7:06:00 AM)


    You have made a pen portrait of the present day family life, which has become the order of the day for various reasons beyond one's control. We never heard of old age homes in those days, but they have become a necessity of late. (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (1/26/2010 6:40:00 PM)


    ok i bow down. not too many people can write long poems and expect others to stay focused. you had my attention with every line. good work =) (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2010 5:49:00 PM)


    Love it!
    your a very exellent writer
    (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (1/26/2010 8:53:00 AM)


    Hats off to you Hasmukh...no one can beat you...excellent (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2010



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