Journey Of Feeling Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Journey Of Feeling

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Begins with a smile
Reincarnated to be a desire
Despite the cold often to charge
Hard-hearted still not budge

From desire become a feeling
Expectations, nuances, also charming
Together, blinded the soul
To differences that invisible

In the differences, doubt created
Make hearts stray to the fragility of believe
Only survive without able to against
Indeed slowly, but surely will gain

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 15 August 2013

We are on a long journey, a great poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 September 2013

Beautifuly Journey of feelings, but its Journey of life too. You have presented it very well. Loved reading it.

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Kevin Patrick 19 August 2013

Feelings are important but so is reason, to much feeling can cause great divisions which can only be subsumed by temperance and reason. If it is a journey of life then there are many feelings that enriches us from what we learn. Great language rich in texture

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Mohabeer Beeharry 18 August 2013

Doubt is dangerous. I like to stand on firm ground. This poem does put me on guard.i like it. Look ahead. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Mohammed Albalushi 17 August 2013

Very good expression I really enjoyed reading it

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Roseann Shawiak 17 August 2013

Life on earth is an unending journey of feelings and emotions, at times limiting us to daily existence. When writing poetry we expand our horizons to include a cacophony of awareness through our senses. Your poem inspired the above thought. Thank you for allowing me to read your poetry. Very good expression. RoseAnn

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