adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

Just An Ordinary Bridge For Extraordinary Dreams - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

I wish i could fly
so I can meet the clouds
gather and merge
then melt and downed

not to refresh the drought
or quench the thirst
but to refract the wish
of becoming the bridge

which unites all the difference
encourage every concern
so there's no more you or me
that oppressed under the legs of hypocrisy

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Comments about Just An Ordinary Bridge For Extraordinary Dreams by adheez van der beanthz

  • Heather Wilkins (8/10/2013 9:46:00 PM)

    your first stanza a delight to read, I have the same wish more than once. I would love to bridge my dreams sometimes. excellent thoughts. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/6/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    And what an extraordinary dream this is. Good job Adheez. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    Oh how I really love this one Adheez. I feel your emotions in this poem in that
    you would like the world to be united as one. There should be no barriers
    between race, religion, national origin and other afflictions of society. If everyone take
    care of the things that matters in their corner of the world then it will bridge the divide.
    I would like very much for you to read my poem If I Could Fly. Very, very inspiring!
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  • Kevin Patrick (6/10/2013 10:15:00 PM)

    I believe the title should be whatever you want it to be, the author has their own dreams to construct (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (6/10/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    Its a beautiful poem and the new title is well chosen. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2013 8:04:00 PM)

    thanks to all for the input and i appreciate it
    but i decide to use this title because i think it represent the entire contents of my poem
    (Report) Reply

  • Ace Of Black Hearts (6/9/2013 7:46:00 PM)

    All Uniting, A Joining At The Hips With Love For All. We Are Now One. The Merging In The Sky. Destroying All The Prejudice. Repairing The Divide. Conquering The Skies. Building A Immortal Bridge. Those are some names I've come with. Good Poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2013 6:28:00 PM)

    I'll suggest, a strange wish or a light bridge
    Even without a title, the poem is so good, thanks for sharing
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  • Sallam Yassin (6/9/2013 6:11:00 PM)

    my wish is raining lights (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (6/9/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    under the legs of hypocrisy

    ...pushing my That Was Easy button! ; -) Very good Write. -Kelly.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013

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