! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***joy And Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***joy And Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


joy and sorrow resolute within and beyond
night seems to lie in deep sleep
speckles of darkness covers her body
i close my eyes by the bliss of love

tonight tolls cry of innocence
as we look back through lone silence
audacity of hope resigns to repose
rain was running in deep breath

earth clenches mirth into riff of dusts
thirst dissolute melting the shadow
would you not comeback to fold of tonight
moments still remembers tinge of snow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 23 June 2009

Fine words............. created fine word-picture! 10+

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

beautiful touching poetry...could alomost hear sad jazzy blues in the background...marvellous work.

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Manuel Odeny 21 June 2009

Great work Doctor, i love your use of Metaphors

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Indira Renganathan 20 June 2009

Every line is superb...excellent descriptive metaphors...marvellous expression and presentation....wonderful poem

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Maria Barbara Korynt 19 June 2009

Beautiful written and great topic. I like it very much :) - 10v. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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rago rago 09 July 2009

joy and sorrow is written from the innerthoughts......and great methophor used in zest..........

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Annika Park 07 July 2009

Two opposite feelings.But Lady Grace is right if your heart is full of joy there will be no space for sorrow. I can say that you are really a telented one.Keep up.

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Lady Grace 29 June 2009

sorrow comes if without joy...so fill your heart with joy so that there's no space for sorrow..grace

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Brishti Mazumdar 28 June 2009

would you not comeback to fold of tonight moments still remembers tinge of snow ...Oh! It touched me....a disguised episode cud be felt.....10++ Brishti

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well crafted poem as always full of intense emotion and vivid imagery... thanks best regards, jdh

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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