Just A Love Song Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Just A Love Song

Rating: 5.0


To write you
These damn words
Coming from
Somewhere else
Not my heart
Not my brain
Don't know where

To write you
I Love You
Feel it
Death knocking
Life stalking
Embracing
My lost soul

To sign you
Love always
Meaning now
Hearts sealed
Me and you
You and God
Me and God

Sunday, August 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love,love and life,romance,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Dillip, so many THX on 2 levels. Firstly, always an honour when you add my poems to your favourites. Secondly, PH hadn't posted my response to Simone. I sincerely hope that they will remedy that now. Because I truly value her comments!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2022

A delightful poem... lovely expression. Loved this sweet poem. Top score.

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Carl Roussell 13 August 2018

I have to agree with Simone; sometimes love creeps up on you even though you try to deny it. A really good poem. A 10.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 August 2018

It crept up on Kerouac so many times, Carl. Thank you so much for believing it to be a really good poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 August 2018

You have me in deep contemplation with this write. It almost seems to be some reluctance to surrender to love in this relationship yet there is more than a human bond from some unknown dynamic. To have a deep devotional connection with all that is and to realise that love comes from more than us is enough to just let be and allow it's course.10+

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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Simone, I'm not sure why PH hadn't posted my reply. Your very positive thought-provoking comments have really touched mine heart. And I am so very grateful!

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Valsa George 12 August 2018

Beautiful love song! Love becomes complete when God comes between man and wife or man and woman!

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Richard Wlodarski 12 August 2018

Couldn't agree with you more, Valsa! Thank you so much for believing it to be a beautiful love song.

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