Just A Skimmer Poem by Susan Williams

Just A Skimmer

Rating: 5.0


Just a skimmer
flitting around the home pond
just a skimmer
...dipping here and darting there
weaving through the pussy willows
breezing over the lily pads
in its flighty zippidy-doo-dah manner
flipping back and forth
like life is a boring book
whose pages can be leafed through
and only the occasional word be read
.
Just a skimmer
...rushing here and there
and back and forth
to get the lay of the land
in general
not going deep
where seaweeds grow tall and tangled
where the big-mouthed fish lay in wait
just a skimmer sticking to the shallows
skating over the context
tripping lightly over the issues
like a rock sent skipping over the water
.
. ~~~~~~~©2012 Susan Williams

Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edmund Strolis 28 August 2018

Within a hair's breath of tickling the surface, swift and sweet at the edge of the impossible and yet somehow in racing streamlined wonder magnificently composed a paradox of freedom and control, Exhilarating joy released for us lucky readers to lose ourselves. A skimmer indeed Zuzan!

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Susan Williams 05 September 2018

Now this comment took me for a delightful ride on skimmer wings! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you Edmund Ztroliz for your luscious and enjoyable comments you lay on your fellow PH members like delicious and fragrant bouquets! ! ! !

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Bill Cantrell 28 August 2018

This poem is shallow by no means! I see depth of meaning with issues being tamed by nature’s charm, the lay of the land is the threshold of your pen my friend, great poem Susan!

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Susan Williams 19 September 2020

thank you for reading and giving such nice comments, Anjandev

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Anjandev Roy 16 September 2020

not going deep........significant..........profound piece........thank u.......anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 31 August 2020

Glad you enjoyed the nature trip, Robert! ! ! ! ! And that it is shelved with your other favorites! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 December 2019

Skimmer! ! Dipping here and darting there! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 15 December 2019

Thank you for reading! ! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 29 March 2019

This lovely poem engenders, a carefree, bien etre (well being) and the simple enjoyment of nature and life. Just being part of Nature's plain site. A tranquilizing and sweetly conceived, delight! You have a special way Of reaching the reader's soul That is deeply and enchantingly, Yours, and yours alone, It's like coming back home.

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Susan Williams 06 April 2019

Yes! You as usual understand. Your comments lift me up every time. Thank you for being a good friend to all of us on PH.

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