Kavita 15 - Me, Myself Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Kavita 15 - Me, Myself

Rating: 4.9

I just wander
In those narrow pathways
Leading to goal unknown.

I am a story yet untold
That God has left incomplete

This is a translation of the poem About Me by KAVITA SINGH
Saturday, July 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: truth
This a translation of the beautiful poem ''About Me' by Ms Kavita Singh.
Rebecca Navarre 04 August 2017

However So Very Beautifully Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Told, Of A Beautifully Precious, Life, Held In Gods Arms, With Incredible Roads..Yet To Journey And Unfold! ! ! ! ! May Your Paths Find.. The Beauty That's Laid Out For Us In The Day Time. And In The Night, May You Find.. The Stars Laid A Beautiful Path For You, That So Brightly Shines! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Excellently Done! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 October 2017

Hi Becca, Thank you for these very interesting comments.

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Anjandev Roy 09 April 2022

This is truly wonderful.........

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Thank You, Mr Roy. Happy that you enjoyed the translation. Please read the original in Hindi.

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Rini Shibu 08 February 2018

Wow very touching and strong feeling. I am a story untold and left incomplete

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 December 2017

Beautiful work Sir, thanks for sharing.However some how I feel there is a little more of depth in Kavita Singh poem that is yet to captured in translation (may be it is cause of the just the choice of words that you preferred) : -) Main 'musafir' hu un 'galiyon' ki.. jiski 'manjil' anjani hai... jise 'likha' nhi.... 'khuda' ne pura... main 'uski' adhuri ek 'kahani hu..

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 February 2018

Very True Ashika. My vocabulary is definitely my constraint...

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Nudershada Cabanes 05 October 2017

A lovely poem. We are all wanderers walking to an unknown goal

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 October 2017

Marvelous observation. Thank You Nur.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 August 2017

A succinct gem. A sense of incompleteness, of emptiness conveyed so effectively in so few words. Kudos. Every person feels that way at times but not everyone can put it into words. A big 10.

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