Kavita 15 - Me, Myself Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

However So Very Beautifully Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Told, Of A Beautifully Precious, Life, Held In Gods Arms, With Incredible Roads..Yet To Journey And Unfold! ! ! ! ! May Your Paths Find.. The Beauty That's Laid Out For Us In The Day Time. And In The Night, May You Find.. The Stars Laid A Beautiful Path For You, That So Brightly Shines! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Excellently Done! ! ! ! !

This is truly wonderful.........

Wow very touching and strong feeling. I am a story untold and left incomplete

Beautiful work Sir, thanks for sharing.However some how I feel there is a little more of depth in Kavita Singh poem that is yet to captured in translation (may be it is cause of the just the choice of words that you preferred) : -) Main 'musafir' hu un 'galiyon' ki.. jiski 'manjil' anjani hai... jise 'likha' nhi.... 'khuda' ne pura... main 'uski' adhuri ek 'kahani hu..

A lovely poem. We are all wanderers walking to an unknown goal

A succinct gem. A sense of incompleteness, of emptiness conveyed so effectively in so few words. Kudos. Every person feels that way at times but not everyone can put it into words. A big 10.