Kavita 02 - About Me Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Kavita 02 - About Me

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I tread those lanes
whose destination is unknown

I am an unfinished story
that He has omitted to complete.

This is a translation of the poem About Me by KAVITA SINGH
Saturday, January 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Galina Italyanskaya 24 October 2017

A lovely poem and translation. Thank you for sharing!

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 October 2017

Thank you Galina. Do you read Hindi, by any chance?

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Galina Italyanskaya 24 October 2017

No, I don't (((

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2019

A short poem of great depth. Powerful lines that aim for truth. Beautifully written and translated.

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Bri Edwards 21 April 2018

thanks for letting us know the source of the original poem. ;)

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 April 2018

The original is in Hindi. I know you do not read Hindi. So, I win! ! ! HeHe!

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Bri Edwards 21 April 2018

i would use neglected, not omitted, BUT I just Googled omitted and find that the second-listed definition of omit has synonyms which include neglect. so we would both be correct. :) your favorite wordophile, bri. :) :)

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Jaya das 10 February 2018

Well that was a nice poem sir Beautiful as always

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Binayakumar Mohanty 05 December 2017

Nice transcreation.Thanks for both writer and transcreator.small but truth.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 December 2017

Thank you Prof. Obliged. I would convey your appreciation to Ms Kavita too.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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