I tread those lanes
whose destination is unknown
I am an unfinished story
that He has omitted to complete.
A short poem of great depth. Powerful lines that aim for truth. Beautifully written and translated.
The original is in Hindi. I know you do not read Hindi. So, I win! ! ! HeHe!
i would use neglected, not omitted, BUT I just Googled omitted and find that the second-listed definition of omit has synonyms which include neglect. so we would both be correct. :) your favorite wordophile, bri. :) :)
Nice transcreation.Thanks for both writer and transcreator.small but truth.
Thank you Prof. Obliged. I would convey your appreciation to Ms Kavita too.
A lovely poem and translation. Thank you for sharing!
Thank you Galina. Do you read Hindi, by any chance?
No, I don't (((