To write you
A love song
Without words
Of such hate
To see you
In your eyes
Eyes blinded
By such love
To hear you
In your love song
So damn deafened
By life threatened
To touch you
Without touch
And feel
Your lost soul
You're really getting submerged in him, aren't you? Even the very style of your verse seems altered by what you have learned in this journey of yours. This is going to be a thrilling book, my friend. 10+++++++++++++++++
Susan, I am totally submerged in him. The style has been altered with his guidance. Thank you so much for believing that it's going to be a thrilling book. I think that you've brought a good omen!
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I second Susan Williams sentiments. All the best to you on this journey.
Thank you so very much, Carl. You, Susan, Kumarmani, Bernard and many others have been so supportive and encouraging. And Daniel Brick...I don't even know where to begin re: his contribution. His constructive criticism is so invaluable and inspiring. All of you are making this an adventure that I will always remember with great fondness.