Kids Poem by merna ibrahim

Kids

Rating: 5.0


Oh! You are a little black boy,
and playing with your small toy.
Oh! You are black from outside,
but your heart and soul are white.

Your innocence is covering you,
from your head till your smallest toe.

You are behaving spontaneously.
You are naive, curious, innocent and asking continuously.
You are vivid at day, and tired at night.
You are a beautiful flower swaying with delight.

You and the whole children are a bless had been granted from the Lord.
And I consider you all as a noble reward.

(the children are great, they are from the biggest blesses that God granted to us.....I dedicate this poem to the whole kids on this planet 'the white and the black' they are both equal.'NO FOR RACISM'......)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lina Ehab 27 November 2009

merna! ! ! ! u have 2 let people know ur talent, as 4 me i see u as a famous poet u r really talanted noone in ur age write this deep feelings that u have u should write in magazines or newspaper u really should i'm not kiddin! ! ! ! <3 <3

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Sara Here 13 August 2009

Magnificent idea, brilliant writing and a superior theme.... can't pass by any of your poems without stopping a struggle inside to give a comment.Yet take it for all that is written and is to come I truly love your poems...

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Kuji Soliman 08 July 2009

i loved the poem so much! ! ! ! and i also think'NO FOR RACISM' is nothing but fair! ! and the last few lines in the poem are spectacular! ! ! pls keep on the good work, , ,10000000/10! ! ! ! ! and if you dont mind i would like to appologize to all of the poets thati've stopped getting in touch with...it's just cuz these past few days have been a little difficult! !

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Afzal Shauq 06 July 2009

You and the whole children are a bless had been granted from the Lord. And I consider you all as a noble reward. a good and impressive poems written on hids..yes they deserve to be praised and loved...its really a good poem..and flow is melodic and interesting one... appreciate you for good job merna...10+++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 June 2009

'Oh! You are black from outside, but your heart and soul are white'... nice expression there Merna...poetic...i liked the good message you convey through your good piece...thanks...10

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PandaPro (STUDENT) 07 October 2020

This is amazing! I wish I could write poems as good as you!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2010

Indeed adorable kids are n’ equally well penned enjoyed this poem much… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Merna Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Rana Zalloum 07 September 2010

kids are the best.... they dont know how to hurt and they make u smile deep down... great poem...

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Brilliant...so well penned. Everything I stand for! All children are blessings from above. Well done my friend! ; D

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good done Dear Merna u r talented! that's it 'NO FOR RACISM' this beautiful poem reflects your kindness... a 10

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