Killer Inside Me Poem by Utsav Patel

Very dark. I love emotion put in this poem. I was very tragic but nicely put. good job.

The thinking of a delinquent beautifully expressed.

rage is something you wanna avoid but you always get stuck to it no matter what you want........brilliant way to show the fact thank you for sharing

That is a deep, deep poem! ! You seem to want to have a lot of anger and stuff to get out of yourself - I say that you should get it out in a HEALTHY way :)

A very deep thought! Well said..

Go drill your purple heart... Then feel your mouth with all those money you'll save... Killer inside me. Silence and emancipation at the end...... a great poem . strange thoughts with substance...... it makes one think. thank you dear poet

That killer still inside me in my grave. That's the coolest line. Now I'm also thinking to write poem on such a theme. good work!

u r a killerrrrrrrrrrr oMG... hahaha am ovr laughing... but nice work but dnt want u to kill any one broh...

This is a very powerful write. If you would put all of that pent up emotion in your poems and keep penning it makes for very positively charged writes. You're an excellent Poet.

you killed me inside hahahaha i loved it, good lines