I was a teddy once
now i am a junk
sitting in a junk yard
I found myself like a
like a useless stuff...
One of them...
Like burden of the world,
Like cause of disease, like a
like disdained...
Huh..
You can not understand it
its apart from geometry
apart from algebra..
Its about philosophy...
Once upon a time,
I was your part of your tears
sorrows
but now all tears dried up..
Everything messed..
Fate is gone..
Faith has been disappear...
Trust been broken..
Love got fade..like a
like a wither rose..
Now frustration all around me..
Feed it..
Eat it..
Ases of my existence is creeping from the edge.. Like a
Like a cigarette..
you have done a wonderful job...the second part is so amazing.! i really enjoyed it. the pain of a heart is beatifully drawn here...thanks for sharing »so close«
This poem reflects the dying thoughts of a.teddy. I don't think you are personally pessimistic! You are so young & there IS A GREAT LIFE ahead of you.Well written.Wish you all the best in poetry world.
Another beautiful work. Wonder what ails your young heart...hoping for some happier ones
Once a teddy always a teddy. Life sometimes deals to us some very hard blows sometimes. Either we fall down under pressure or roll with the punches. Keep the faith. I have a poem called Walk by Faith. Thanks for sharing yours.
I love the creativity you used in using a old stuffed animal. You did a good job twisting the thought into somthing way darker. Great read.
A well written poem, I like especially the line “I was a part of your tears”, so beautiful.
strong emotion............ i like it........kep doing the good work......... god bless u...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hey nice poem full of emotions... But dont be so pessimistic....enjoy your life to the fullest....God bless you...