Kissing The World Adieu Poem by Sebastian Melmoth

Kissing The World Adieu



Fear trembling shaking old bones aching

Anger constant fighting rage of the unknown of no control

Death like feelings the ending reeling washing one's failing mind every day

Prison of mental illness the worry the fight of a threatened soul

Scary thoughts taking over covered with a blanket of spikes stabbing at a loving heart

Medication not working the last hope for better days slipping away blurred lines altering reality

No help, tick box support does anyone really care with my arms of despair reaching out into a fog of emotional wilderness

All the signs all there, looking back they will say why didn't we see it why we didn't care

When will the release come for the end starting to look like a good friend?

Time to go on a journey to the comfort with family and friends reunited on the other side at piece seeking solace from a different view

Writing these words, as the living clock ticks, don't shed a tear for me just be happy I'm free

So, sending you peace, love and happy days as I wave walk up the stairs kissing the world adieu

Kissing The World Adieu
Saturday, November 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,human nature,isolation,emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 01 December 2019

2 – Time for more proofreading. " Time to go on a journey to the comfort with family and friends reunited on the other side at piece seeking solace from a different view " i'd said " of family" and.." peace" ! ha ha. it is in both copies of poem, above. last line; i'd use " wave & walk" but i like it well enough to send to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2019

1 – is " tick box" a clock? ok, the answer is at end of poem favorite line so far: " When will the release come for the end starting to look like a good friend? "

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