An inside craze!
An inside craze
To remain at the top always!
I brace up my knees...
But my Ortho tells me
Not to bother much
About making highs;
After all, He says,
I would need my knees
To kneel before Him
For all my further
Inner Diagnosis!
16th January 2010
knees plea for inner diagnosis too...a very clever write
Very true and very strong thoughts written in short and simple... :)
Very intelligent and subtle piece Kesav, like the way you introduce the title.
Kesav you make a strong point here with a very strong metaphoric write.....our chase to reach the top and stay there is shortlived....we need to bow before our Maker
Thanks Sridevi. I am happy at least one of the readers so far, could get to the correct message inside my metaphoric write. The 'craze' is the relentless race we undertake in life to achieve highs- bracing up- at the expense of our soul- knees. 'My Ortho' there means God. Whatever highs we achieve, at the end of the 'race', we are forced to renounce all and to kneel before HIM for the final judgment- Inner Diagnosis Thanks Again
The craze to be at the top always....but ultimately we have to bend forward before HIM.
Let the young enthusiasts do their part of the job. Well worded.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Once again you've succeeded writing a poem that gives multiple choices of interpretations, both on physical and subtle planes, a clever write with both a meaning and message!