She could feel his eyes
on the nape of her neck
She could hear him
barely breathing
And wondered if one can
hear a heart
And a soul singing
Ah, it's good to be back, discovering the best new work on poemhunter! Nice one Sonya...I can feel the atmosphere...
When bodies and souls become one, all inner feelings become vocal. A very romantic piece of write, Sonya.
So many emotions stirred in so few words - wonderful stuff! S :)
Very well done and said Sonya. I was barely breathing as i read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
It's gorgeous - you can feel the air rise on the back of your neck. Beautifully done
A beautiful expression of an intimate moment. You leave open the question of whether he is aware that she is aware of him. Nicely done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very romantic. Two souls in tune. May the music never end.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra