Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(l) 5 (My Baby) My Inner Sun - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

You flew in softly and tiptoed in my life
My parched soul got a reprieve
My heart is now your permanent home
We shall play with elves and gnomes

The moon will sing with me a lullaby
The stars do a slow tambourine dance in the sky
My blurred vision suddenly got a divine sight
You are the soul of my soul, my eternal light

There is a river gushing inside me
You are the fountain, you are my chi
I hear nothing but your sweet voice
You shimmer, you glisten and I rejoice

You, my darling are my inner sun
You are the song that I will hum
Today, tomorrow and forever
Your inner light I shall devour

You are the ink on my heart that will never blur
The calligraphy etched deep inside
You have fulfilled a deep void
You are my baby, my love, my joy, my pride


Comments about (l) 5 (My Baby) My Inner Sun by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (10/28/2006 8:41:00 PM)

    We shall play with elves and gnomes, makes the poem........10 (Report)Reply

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  • (10/22/2006 7:16:00 AM)

    Perfect; serene, flowing, adoring, glowing with love. Warming to read and finely penned. t x (Report)Reply

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  • (10/21/2006 5:29:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem Tranquil. I love it. Excellently written. Take care. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/19/2006 6:30:00 PM)

    what a heart sent message here......such lines of image......well skipted T.O. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/19/2006 3:54:00 PM)

    Very well written and articulated Tranquil.
    Laters.....Joshua.
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/19/2006 12:53:00 PM)

    T.O.>>>Gorgeous, warm tale of aMother's Love, so it appears to me....Perhaps your's....Smooth, & serne & garnered with a wealth of Passio....Splendid job T.O., AS ALWAYS FROM YOU'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report)Reply

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  • (10/19/2006 9:15:00 AM)

    a perfect beauty! ..

    a wonderful expression of feelings...

    elves n gnomes, n stars doing a slow tambourine dance...creates such a supernatural ambience...

    i loved this 1, TO...

    Asma...
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  • (10/19/2006 9:03:00 AM)

    very nice tran Q dave............................: -) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 19, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010


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