(l) 5 (My Baby) My Inner Sun Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(l) 5 (My Baby) My Inner Sun

Rating: 3.7


You flew in softly and tiptoed in my life
My parched soul got a reprieve
My heart is now your permanent home
We shall play with elves and gnomes

The moon will sing with me a lullaby
The stars do a slow tambourine dance in the sky
My blurred vision suddenly got a divine sight
You are the soul of my soul, my eternal light

There is a river gushing inside me
You are the fountain, you are my chi
I hear nothing but your sweet voice
You shimmer, you glisten and I rejoice

You, my darling are my inner sun
You are the song that I will hum
Today, tomorrow and forever
Your inner light I shall devour

You are the ink on my heart that will never blur
The calligraphy etched deep inside
You have fulfilled a deep void
You are my baby, my love, my joy, my pride

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Darbyshire 19 October 2006

very nice tran Q dave............................: -)

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 October 2006

a perfect beauty! .. a wonderful expression of feelings... elves n gnomes, n stars doing a slow tambourine dance...creates such a supernatural ambience... i loved this 1, TO... Asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 October 2006

T.O.>>>Gorgeous, warm tale of aMother's Love, so it appears to me....Perhaps your's....Smooth, & serne & garnered with a wealth of Passio....Splendid job T.O., AS ALWAYS FROM YOU'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Joshua Fegley 19 October 2006

Very well written and articulated Tranquil. Laters.....Joshua.

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Ntando 26 February 2021

This made me cry ♥️

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David Gerardino 28 October 2006

We shall play with elves and gnomes, makes the poem........10

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Perfect; serene, flowing, adoring, glowing with love. Warming to read and finely penned. t x

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Ruby Root 21 October 2006

What a beautiful poem Tranquil. I love it. Excellently written. Take care.

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Geoff Warden 19 October 2006

what a heart sent message here......such lines of image......well skipted T.O.

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