Labour Room Poem by Parijat Banerjee

Labour Room

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Labour room

It was gloomy, pitch dark with patches of blue!
Only a lamp was glowing to overcome the inevitability.
The ambience was, as if, imitating the excruciating pain...
Even the anaesthesia couldn't divulge the precedence.

Deep inside the core of Mother Earth,
The labour room was getting ready for the volcanic eruption!
The dormant mountain orifice was ready to tear apart-
The 'just born' lava ashes sublimed into the darkness until eternity!

Tuesday, November 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: abstract,dark,surrealism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A comparison of the Labour room intensity along with the depth of the Earth who nurtures us with her pain and suffering.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Well conceived and elegantly crafted in good diction with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Parijat.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2017

The labour room was getting ready for the volcanic eruption! ..A wonderful poem is shared! Welcome to Poem Hunter dear poet.10

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Brian Wanjala 14 November 2017

i like your style... keep up

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Parijat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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