Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,807 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Lady Of The Lake 2 - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

I saw the old lady
again today
the one who lives
across the way

She took my hand
and walked me
towards the light

It was so beautiful and bright
heavenly souls all waiting in a line
but I had to close my eyes
and turn away

The old lady said
don't go back into the dark
it's time to start a new life
with souls of the same heart

I said
I've got to stay behind
and watch over my daughters life
I trust nobody but me and
her mother to make sure
she has a good start in life
so I will walk on the dark side
to be by her side

when she's made her life
and I know she's happy inside
I will come to the light


Comments about Lady Of The Lake 2 by Dave Alan Walker

  • (8/28/2012 12:37:00 AM)


    The person has taken the right decision to take care of his/her daughter instead of getting enlightened himself/herself. If every parent thinks this way and avoid all distractions, this world will be a better place for future generations! Nice poem, Dave! (Report) Reply

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  • (8/27/2012 12:53:00 PM)


    Ah yes... this one glows with the beauty of the light upon your soul. Nice, very nice. (Report) Reply

  • (8/25/2012 7:32:00 PM)


    as long as you there nurturing your daughter, you're in the light! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/24/2012 5:36:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem Dave, let's hope there is light on the other side. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (8/24/2012 5:11:00 PM)


    Keep watch over your daughter Dave, far more important, great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Knight Fizzstorm (8/24/2012 2:30:00 PM)


    A riveting heartfelt poem. I commend you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 30, 2012


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