Last Night I Didn't Write Comments

GREAT...AAA RRR...About the grandeur and splendour Of my motherland And the people of my country Were reading it with immense concentration and reverence,

(cont.) .. line 4: 'I dreamt that' But in last line: 'Thereafter I fell into deep deep slumber.' I'm NOT an expert of the stages of sleep, but.... ? ? ? ;)

other than my questions about words, I like the poem well enough. 3 1/2 stars. bri ;) WAIT! I just reread the title and text. (cont.) ..

I don't 'know' the word 'sublime' well enough to use it; that is true of many words for me! I wonder what words you might use to explain YOUR meaning here of sublime. Hmm? ;)

'Were reading it with immense concentration and reverence, ' .... Did you 'want' 'When' or 'Was' in place of 'Were'? ? ? bri ;)

How wonderful Anjandev! A dream about your beautiful motherland.........10 + To my favourite

Dreams carry the desires in the subconscious mind. Glad your good desire was fulfilled thus. Nice work

Yesterday, I wrote four poems

Lovely write x Thanks for sharing!