Lasting Love Poem by Honest Heart

Lasting Love

Rating: 4.7


How kind of the world to give you to me! ! To stay with me... to fall in love with me! ! !

In every life we will stay alive! ! !

You promised me, I promised you to stay together... Loving each other! ! !
You know me but I don't know you! ! !

In every life we will stay alive! ! !

I don't know how and I don't why, but we will stay together … Loving each other! !

In every life we will stay alive! ! !

You saw me crying, but I didn't know why! ! ! You started crying too, but I still don't know why! !

After a while, we looked at each other full of feeling, and suddenly... We stopped crying when we realized that we are still together.. Loving each other! ! !

In every life we will stay alive! ! !

You are like a shining star! I don't see you often... but I know that you are alive in the depth of my heart! !

In every life we will stay alive! ! !

With you I am laughing! !
With you I am flying! !
With you I am breathing! !
With you I am just fine! !

Without you I am crying! !
Without you I am dying! !
Without you my life is just woe! !

In every life we will stay alive! ! !


(Dedication: This poem is for someone special! ! !)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daryl Young 18 March 2009

Very cool. Nice flow and powerful. Almost forceful. Thank you for reading my work as well. Can't wait for more. Rabbit

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 March 2009

Love is like a shining star which glows deep inside the heart and the soul. May this love twinkle in your heart forever! Best Wishes Naseer

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Breeanna Mcelmurry 22 March 2009

Good poem I in joyed reading it

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 02 April 2009

How refreshing, your first poem on PH allowing us to share your happiness - be alive - Oh yes, giving love, being in love.....a wonderful tribute to that special someone - impatiently waiting for the next - Cindy

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Hari Khabrani 05 April 2009

Till love really flourishes both sides and, hence, the expression and dedication. Readable.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

Another cute love poem. 10++

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Angelic(Annie) Female 09 May 2009

Oh! i was just goin to paste the same words Anjali already did! ! It's so beautiful, a heart is touched :)

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Anjali Sinha 09 May 2009

You are like a shining star! I don't see you often... but I know that you are alive in the depth of my heart! ! very lovely words dear good write-- anjali

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para mi.. tu eres muy dulce....

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Fathmath Sana 12 April 2009

you sure is an Honest Heart! kyp it up dude!

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