the blazing sunset
danced on the ocean like flames
and scorched the skyline.
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the moonlight fell down
and broke on the waves like glass
in golden fragments.
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Like flames! ! Seeing the wonders of nature. Thanks for sharing.
Stunningly, beautiful write, in just a few words you have vividly embraced lovingly the sunset it's breathtaking impact then the moonlight with it's competitive edge gives the grand finale. A duet of spectacular beauty, love the title and pic! Outstanding write!
What an amazing imagery is drawn really. In ocean flame of sunset is dancing. Making veil in sky golden fragments of many waves are breaking in to Earth in ocean. EXCELLENT this poem is really....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
GOLDEN FRAGMENTS OF MOON LIGHT are really sprinkled in each line of sea waves. Very nice poem you have composed.10
Many thanks Pintu, ....