Learning To Count! (For The Beautiful Mystery Of Miss Janice) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Learning To Count! (For The Beautiful Mystery Of Miss Janice)

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WON.
TOO.
TREE.
FORE!
HIVE.
SEX.
HEAVEN.
ATE.
NEIN!

THEN..!

See?

It's as easy as

A
B
C
!

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Yeah, I know...but believe it or not this is a love poem. You know when your world is turned completely upside down and you have to re-learn everything because a woman has taken(one by one) each molecule of you and replaced them(again one by one) with nothing( ) but...love...her love. Totally transforming you! I am just learning how to get the gist of things again and as you can see I can almost count and account for myself but not quiet...not...quiet! Right! Let's see how that goes again...ONE TWO THREE (SEE!) FOUR FIVE ...SEX...HEAVEN!

Ahhh...Houston...I think we have a problem!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 04 August 2008

You turn even the simplest things into a pleasure to read! And learning to count again, just like relearning how to walk or how to talk must indeed bring even more pleasure when you master it again... HG: -) xx

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Onelia Avelar 01 August 2008

Talking in an euphoria, you transform the words in a genuine way, really :) . Glad to see you in your natural gaseous molecular state, fallen in love again Donall Dempsey!

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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