Leaving Dreadful Poem by Crystal Pierce

leaving for good at that's a fact...........i still think this needs work. :) and i think you never let me know if i could edit this and put it into a 'showcase'. there is room in January and February now. what do you say, Chryssie? ? bri ;)

Chryssie, ah, it's do blissful............i'll bet you meant...so blissful. leaving for good at that's a fact. .................and that's a fact..perhaps and :) i like that you capitalized the second 'dreadful' in the last stanza. except for typos(?) , i really enjoyed this. and, to tell the truth, i kind of like finding typos. it is nice to think (at least) that i can still find them........in mine and in other's. to MyPoemList. and if you say it is ok, i will also put it into my/our November showcase for PH poets (on my site here) , in Section A. let me know if i should change those two 'typos' or leave them as they now are. OK! let me know if that would be ok with you. it will have your PH name on it as the author and join poems from around the world in my monthly display of poems by some of my PH friends. bri :) thanks for the update on your life and the sharing of your fine poem. bri :)