A Far Away Star...

Rating: 4.9
You are the moon in the sky
and i am a far away star from you
you can give me light and make me bright
but i have nothing to offer you
would that be ok with you?

October 22,2008
Wednesday, October 22, 2008
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Memo Said 04 January 2011
No words describe you words but i want to say i love your words Nice Nice words
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Rachel Anderson 28 December 2009
this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]
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Rachel Anderson 28 December 2009
this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]
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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 October 2009
This poem is OK for me. You are the star.
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Paige S 02 July 2009
Very tender write! Nice Job! ! ! ! 10+
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Kesav Easwaran 21 May 2009
a starry question...no; an offer a sweet bargain! ...10
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Indira Renganathan 16 April 2009
How sweet...you can as well say a hi...sweet poem10+++++++
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Seema Chowdhury 05 November 2008
a nice little poem to read. always remember that everyone has something to offer. you can pray for some one's kindness. can't you? ? ?
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 November 2008
You can offer a lot Hataw Muhamad, words which are brighter than stars and moon. Nice little poem. Keep on writing!
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I still wonder what makes a poet.. this clarified it a little bit for me.. it is the ability to look a a blank sheet of paper and see words... or to take a handful of soil and it in see worlds.. thats what you did... ciao Leslie
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