Let Us Watch... Poem by Randhir kaur

Let Us Watch...

Rating: 5.0


Some are blue with hits,
Some are dumped in shits,
Some where there is black-white conflicts,
Some are breaking the wall of heart brick by bricks...
No remedy to cease it,
Because zilch can be it,
Nothing makes everything in it...
Let us watch my brother's and sister's,
It is a film to cry, a saga which is not parable as History,
Because there is no one who will give their today for our tomorrow........

Let Us Watch...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice one... good poem..10 Some decisions It is all about present day and past The story may last But impression is carried over And some decisions are influenced for future

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Seeing the ways of mankind on earth today! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 30 June 2016

Because there is no one who will give their today for our tomorrow A very insightful line, Randhir

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Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

Wish I can understand it all to grow myself, yet something deep in black and white! ! Thank you for sharing! 10++++!

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Randhir Kaur 08 July 2016

Thank you Nurul for your words and wishes... Stay connected.

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B.m. Biswas 06 July 2016

Every quotation submitted by you from your poems are really quotable... In this poem I also find a line.....it is a film to cry, a sagasaga.....as history.. Is alo a great line..........you have real feelings....... Thanks.....have a happy pen......nurul.

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Randhir Kaur 05 July 2016

Thank you Mehta, Edward, Kelly and Khalid Sir for your kind appreciations.. Made my day..Peace. Keep reading.

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Beautifully expressed ideas.Good job done Randhir Kaur Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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