Lets Stay Here Awhile.. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Lets Stay Here Awhile..

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Wait a minute baby, dusk is almost
gone. There's a shadow of a moon, that'll
be full before to long. We don't have to
say anything.. Wind in the pines is blowing
strong. Little red bird in the tree. Happly
he sings along...The river is really talking,
lets just listen to it for awhile... There's
muskrats, building their dam, down by Stoney
Isle... So many stars that need counting, we
haven't done that for sometime. Haven't looked
up lately, to see them shine. Skies wide and
clear, still love ya so dear. Smell the campfire
near. All so free and open. Won't you pass over
what your token. Let's sit here for awhile,
inhale a deep breath, and smile...Slip your hand
over mine... Lets just drift with time... Just You
and I... Wait a minute baby, lets stay here for
awhile...

Sunday, November 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,fun,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 July 2021

I tried to put long comments but the comments are skipping. I will read your beautiful poems some other day

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 July 2021

A fabulous poem.... beautifully written!

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2017

Thats good to see you keep writing, indeed you are in greater creative space now...i am glad to see that Becca, and not surprising when i read your poem, i can adhere my soul to it, it has whispering voice all over your write...the natural diction and flowy lines, just a beautiful poem you did here, so here i stay awhile reading this beautiful poem..keep writing to all of us, i maybe not here, but plenty of hearts can read yours happily :) stay blessed

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Rebecca Navarre 24 November 2017

Thank You Ever So Much Soul! ! ! ! ! Who Touches Hearts So! ! ! ! ! :) Your Poetry Has Always Been A Light So Bright! ! ! ! ! In The Dark To Hearts Here At P.h! ! ! ! ! Please Always Know This! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Being So Kind! ! ! ! ! Hope You Return Soon! ! ! ! ! And Thank You For Being My Friend! ! ! ! ! :) Hope And Pray Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! And Paths Bright! ! ! ! ! May Your Kindness Always Return 10 Fold! ! ! ! !

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George Dietz 19 November 2017

Dont forget a sunset a sip of wine and a warm embrace! As usual a great poem!

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Rebecca Navarre 19 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! George. For Your Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! You Are An Ever So Very Inspirational Poet! ! ! ! ! With A Beauty So Deep! ! ! ! ! To Many It Will Touch And Reach! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Laquory Jones 19 November 2017

Nice Poem Becca I enjoyed it thanks for sharing

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Rebecca Navarre 19 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! Laquory, For Such A Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Poetry Page! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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