Life Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Life

Rating: 5.0


Lead me to the rock. Guide me to the shores.
Know I can get so lost, if on my own I explore.
Standing out here, could be so beautiful. Or it
could be, just lonely darken, moors. With out
you, I'm just tore. Thistles in the wind. Under
the evening sunset can bring, such pleasure with
in. Or it could be a thorn, that leaves you
feeling lost and worn. The dark could shatter the
night. Or to the soul, be light. You bring me
sight. Only with you, can there be life.

Friday, March 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,heart,nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 09 March 2018

Life is meaningful when you have someone to share it with. Wonderfully penned.10

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Rebecca Navarre 10 March 2018

Thank You! ! ! Nudershada, For Such A Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! God Brings Meaning And Life In Everything That Surrounds! ! ! ! ! ... :) Your Poetry Is Ever So Beautifully Moving! ! ! ! ! With Ever Such Beautiful Flow! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Excellent poem Rebecca Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

into a thesis

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

The opening line can be extended

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

A great poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 March 2018

Rebecca, such a brilliant poem👍👍👍

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Rebecca Navarre 10 March 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bernard, For Such A Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Powerful, Beautiful And Deep! ! ! ! ! Of Nature And Life It Does Speak! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! heh, your reply comes down little different? Hope And Pray Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rajnish Manga 09 March 2018

A poem full of mystic flavour, divine love and longing. Thanks, Rebecca. Lead me to the rock. Guide me to the shores. With out.... you, I'm just tore.

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Rebecca Navarre 10 March 2018

Thank You! ! ! Rajnish, For Such A Beautiful And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Filled With Beauty, Nature, Strength And Life! ! ! ! ! That Brings Inspiration And Delight! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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