Lewis Carroll Said... Poem by M.J. Lemon

M.J., I like both versions. But I prefer the earlier one. It totally reminds me of astral projection. Maybe, post both under different titles. As always, excellent write!

Mark, i love both version equally...thus i should appreciate both, that such a beautiful set of work :)

Thanks, Bri! Plagerism, odd? ? You were clearly thinking of what is not some academic transgression. But plagiarism? ? I'm clearly talking about toast. Carroll is all about the 'mighty dead.'

I also say: you may like two poems (mine) 'inspired by' Lewis Carroll: Alice Threw The Looking Glass (Not-So-Pretty) ... [rock & Roll Fairy Tale; Fantasy? ; 1970s ] (3-20-15) and: Alice In (And Out Of) .....Blunderland * …[ Fiction; Becoming An; Parents' Desires Vs. Offspring's Abilities & Desires ] (11-20-19 bri :)

" homage" ? ? , it's almost plagerism.* * this PC underline this and i discovered this is the ('odd', to me) spelling: " plagiarism" OK, i was curious and Googled Carroll's Dreamland, finding a very nice, not-too-long poem. I was misinterpreting your Poet's Notes as meaning it was/is Carroll's poem you put in the Poet's Notes. " toast" ? Shall i try to " butter you up" ? ? bri ;)

To write something that favourably compares to Lewis Carroll is a high compliment! I agree with all the other comments that state the reader likes both versions. Smashing imagination and talent, Mj!

Hi Mark.. Pure and all of me want to get rid of none other but pure and all of me, so I dream.. is it! If I am divided then there will be two pure me :) , but I dream. very nice cycle and poem