Life Poem by Siti Nursyafiqa Syaqireen

Life

Rating: 4.5


Life, let it drift into the midsummer seas.
A meaningless, endless torture of the thy soul, blessed be.
Diverged in paths no man wished to foresee.
A sorrowful life awaits thee.

Life, beautiful yet painful, truthfully written.
By the one who bares all creation.
A purpose, is it not what thou seek?
But without a creator thou shall not reap.

Life, as they weep for their beloved.
A reminder of death, as it crawled.
Repent not, thy shall regret.
A punishment awaits. Haven? lost.

Life seeks just but does not pay.
A crime of passion sinfully displayed.
Now stupidity and idiocy goes unpaid.
But remember, haunting starts, anguish replays.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem about life and the concequences of the choices we make. Dedicated to a friend.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 03 September 2012

Rich and allusive.Trez bien!

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Terrance Woolridge 06 September 2012

That's deep

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Abdallah Gamal 04 September 2012

Outstanding! I'm amazed at your creativity and your ability to play with the words that deliver the idea to the reader's mind. Beautiful work! ! ! 10+++

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Alafe Ramat 04 September 2012

Beautifuly worded poem, .......

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Anamika Goswami 04 September 2012

i liked reading it.. though the subject is kind of foreboding, but yes life does pay you back in the same coin... Very good indeed.

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Spiritual Seeker 25 September 2012

Great write, enjoyed every lines and its wise message! Keep writing...A great 10.

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Roger Bowman 18 September 2012

''But remember, haunting starts, anguish replays'' great poemo... keep on writing, i m looking forward reading more of your writings.. :)

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Daniel Einstein 18 September 2012

Very deep and close to the heart, i see, i demand another poem! xD good job, this poem speaks for itself.

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Marieta Maglas 11 September 2012

a very sad life- well written poem-keep writing

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Valerie Dohren 11 September 2012

Beautiful poem, a great write.

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