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Life- A Painting

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At birth our life is like a plain canvas
and our potential is the colours,
Our decisions is the sketch
our will power is the paint brush,
The strokes on the canvas are our choices,
a very special effect is given the every time we're wise;
The affectionate relations we maintain becomes the out line,
The love and joy we share becomes the frame
Our attitude and creativity is a lamination
At last, all these results into a beautiful creation.

at death, this canvas is either considered a treasured master piece
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Saturday, September 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 19 May 2016

Good imagery and thought about our life perception. Well penned.

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thanks a lot sir..so nice of your comment! thank you!

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Jadeja Kuldipsinh 09 April 2016

Mind blowing Pranayeeji, Really an excellent poem. Thanks for sharing the poem

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thank you sir for reading this poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 January 2016

Potential, decisions, will power, choices, wisdom, relationships, love and joy, These are all very important words that decide our lives. you have compiled every thing into the one image of canvas, and painting. amazing poem. thank you

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thanks a lot sir!

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Well done.Human life is interesting to watch and read.

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really human life is as interesting as a suspense novel.....thank u for reading my poem

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 September 2015

a very well penned write, Pranayee, with a nice imagery and an enticing message. Keep posting Thanks for sharing and.. WELCOME at P.H.! :) Cheers

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thank you!

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