Golden dust upon these sacred lands draws near, angels of personified beauty; yet we misunderstand their guidance for truth, buried deep below our shark filled oceans of unknown mysteries - rushing through woe contaminated lakes and streams.
Caressing pasts intertwine present and future, sparking new balances upon scales of law and justice, thus completing long painful cycles - erasing hardship - creating new currents that push us forward, towards priceless advancements; hence, stretching arms of our elders, push imprisoned souls away from poisoned, historic moments of the past.
Here we stand, white man holding hands with black women; singing carols, to free eternal lives of peace; rewriting treaties to reclaim prosperity for lands once forgotten in unfair games of Monopoly; forgiving those who cheated in games of solitaire, allowing access down new roads, to seek and accept friendship, between the many bloodlines of mankind.
mindblowing please keep writing.you are a great poet in the making
Golden dust upon this sacred lands draws us near, ...here we stand white men holding hands with blackwomen, singing carols....what a great poem, there is a perfect analogy between the premable, the middle and the end. You did a nice work, it shows that racial barriers are thinnig down. I like it very much.10+++
a chnace discovery...hey, you are incredible, young lady!
A very good poem; well written.A world devoid of racism should be the target of all.Well done.Keep writing for you are in the mould of a great poet.
Sounds like a blueprint for peace.What you say makes great sense.Well written.10(if I could register a vote) .
Here we stand, white man holding hands with black women; singing carols, to free eternal lives of peace; rewriting treaties to reclaim prosperity for lands once forgotten i......quite ingenious by imagery, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing
yes...very true. a poem, very practical. a rare combination. wonderful though. thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
oh.... powerful! .......