Life Blooms Poem by Rini Shibu

Life Blooms

Rating: 5.0


The life have fallen apart
from its branches
The bare dry tree
still stands up right
in a hope
The Sun's rays as fall
on its bark
it smiles at the breeze
asking to come closer
to look at the buds on its twigs
ready to bloom at this spring

Wednesday, March 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 09 March 2018

A hopeful poem Rini. Life is ever full of hope always blooming with a new spring after every winter.10

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Rini Shibu 12 March 2018

Thanks Nudershada Cabanes..

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Kostas Lagos 08 March 2018

A beautiful blooming poem!

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Kostas Lagos..! !

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2018

Yes, spring is about hope. About death standing and waiting to embrace the life that spring promises. Gently and colorfully envisioned here, Rini. Bravo. :)

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Seamus, glad that you liked it.. Rini

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Lamar Cole 08 March 2018

This is a very nice poem about life blooms.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thank you so much Lam..! ! Rini

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Ravinder Soni 07 March 2018

'Life has left its branches; the bare tree still stands upright in hope of the Sun's rays to fall on its bark; it smiles at the trees as though to draw it closer to look at the buds on its twigs ready to bloom this spring.' - Superb imagery, Rini; the poet in you has spoken for all to hear.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Ravindrer Soni..! ! Rini

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