Manonton Dalan

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Life On It - Poem by Manonton Dalan

I thought I said
it all; very clear
making you expecting
more things to come
while sun pale to grey
stroking earth's skin
her daughters seek
warmness of shelter

I listen when you're
done with your talking
I am hearing your heart
beats to my gentle touch
your breathing deeper
as if begging for air
here's my lips; breath

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship


Comments about Life On It by Manonton Dalan

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/30/2015 3:11:00 AM)


    a lovely poem, you have painted your passions very well in the poem, you are a great poet, you write very well, thankss (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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