Life Replied... Poem by Randhir kaur

Life Replied...

Rating: 4.3


A real parley.

-How's life?
-You are my life.
-Then won't you ask your life how it is going?
-My life tell me how it's going on?
Life replied, 'No matter if there are ups and down, I will go on by any means '...



Poetry technique-Colloquy, Micro-tale.

Life Replied...
Thursday, November 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 10 November 2016

Nice though, .enjoyed reading the poem.

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2016

Life replied, 'No matter if there are ups and down, I will go on by any means... great imaginay. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

1 0 Reply
Jagdish Singh Ramána 25 December 2019

Beautiful optimistic approach to life, which makes life the life.

0 0 Reply
Siddartha Montik 28 December 2016

Life replied, 'No matter if there are ups and down, I will go on by any means ' Life and Time just Go on in parallel .. God has No time always to check it always! !

1 0 Reply
Randhir Kaur 13 November 2016

Thank you each one of you for the precious words. So much glad to see a positive feedback. Really blessed. Please stay in touch, keep writing and keep reading. Stay updated.

1 0 Reply
Annette Aitken 12 November 2016

No matter what life throughs at use, it will go on regardless...nicely done Annette

1 0 Reply
B.m. Biswas 12 November 2016

a very positive poem......displays the attitude of a strong heart.... Randhir keep writing.....

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success