Life With A Sea Poem by Thampi KEE

Life With A Sea

Rating: 4.5


we loved the way God utter his sweet words to me
and he touched my life and again I loved him
She is with me not to mourn without a sadness


We loved here again to live with sea
and we touched his soul to find love
and not to share this rain
when I find her she will be with rain


and corner of this coast I find farm full of fish to catch
corner of my life

and just to reach, she tell me we live here to share these wealth

Waiting for the same breeze!

All this music,
the joy we play
a beauteous girl
she my be a soul of sea
felt us to keep this may be for us,
What is really a truth of touch
a sin not to enjoy here

Catch a fish to eat and to rest here to find life



Even if We find nothing around the coast where, they spoil there life
Still I enjoy
Their tenderness and juicy smell...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What we find here in this coastal villages are not as sweet as we see
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 22 March 2015

Life of poor fishermen who live on the sea shore is never sweet as we imagine! They have a sad tale to tell, though we enjoy the sea as casual visitors or tourists! A nice write on the sea!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 March 2015

Ok i can coment once more, i hope it lasts. This is a lovely poem on the sea, unique! So nice to read u again.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 27 March 2015

Somehow, this poem reminded me of Hugo's The Toilers Of The Sea, which I had read long back. May be due to the all-pervading smell of sea in it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 April 2015

A Beautiful poem on sea. From far the sea looks so beautiful and many poets have portrayed the beautiful description of sea. But from near, the sea as well as those who survive on its wealth is quite different. Loved the way you presented it.

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Clarence Prince 06 April 2015

To me, this sounds like a sea of wandering thoughts or maybe something for readers to reread! Thanks for sharing, Thampi KEE!

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Amitava Sur 03 April 2015

A nice elaborate write on sea with various facets of it. Thanks for sgaring

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2015

Nice narration about sea. High speculation and beautifully envisioned. Many thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 28 March 2015

Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it.

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