Thampi KEE

Bronze Star - 2,736 Points (kerala India)

Life With A Sea - Poem by Thampi KEE

we loved the way God utter his sweet words to me
and he touched my life and again I loved him
She is with me not to mourn without a sadness

We loved here again to live with sea
and we touched his soul to find love
and not to share this rain
when I find her she will be with rain

and corner of this coast I find farm full of fish to catch
corner of my life

and just to reach, she tell me we live here to share these wealth

Waiting for the same breeze!

All this music,
the joy we play
a beauteous girl
she my be a soul of sea
felt us to keep this may be for us,
What is really a truth of touch
a sin not to enjoy here

Catch a fish to eat and to rest here to find life

Even if We find nothing around the coast where, they spoil there life
Still I enjoy
Their tenderness and juicy smell...

Form: Elegy

Poet's Notes about The Poem

What we find here in this coastal villages are not as sweet as we see

Comments about Life With A Sea by Thampi KEE

  • Geetha Jayakumar (4/8/2015 12:03:00 PM)

    A Beautiful poem on sea. From far the sea looks so beautiful and many poets have portrayed the beautiful description of sea. But from near, the sea as well as those who survive on its wealth is quite different.
    Loved the way you presented it.
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  • Clarence Prince (4/6/2015 9:20:00 AM)

    To me, this sounds like a sea of wandering thoughts
    or maybe something for readers to reread!
    Thanks for sharing, Thampi KEE!
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  • Amitava Sur (4/3/2015 7:49:00 AM)

    A nice elaborate write on sea with various facets of it. Thanks for sgaring (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/31/2015 2:36:00 AM)

    Nice narration about sea. High speculation and beautifully envisioned. Many thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (3/28/2015 10:41:00 PM)

    Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/27/2015 12:24:00 AM)

    Somehow, this poem reminded me of Hugo's The Toilers Of The Sea, which I had read long back. May be due to the all-pervading smell of sea in it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/24/2015 12:01:00 PM)

    Ok i can coment once more, i hope it lasts.
    This is a lovely poem on the sea, unique! So nice to read u again.
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  • Valsa George (3/22/2015 8:07:00 AM)

    Life of poor fishermen who live on the sea shore is never sweet as we imagine! They have a sad tale to tell, though we enjoy the sea as casual visitors or tourists! A nice write on the sea! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015

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