The holidays have been a time of looking at my life.
It makes me wonder how I'm doing as a mother and a wife.
I hope I am successful in this most important task.
I know that I have tried my best...... is this all that I can ask?
It makes me think about the times I could have given more.
I have to also focus on our life beyond the door.
I see room for some improvement in this life I call my own.
It's lifes little introspections that helps to see if I have grown.
With each new year that passes I can say life has improved.
It helps when I make sure that negativity is removed
Welcome back Mary with a very nice poem! It's called growth, and it works better without the negativity, as you say. Warmly Ray
I'm always trying Mary, but I suppose you can't teach on old Dog (Bitch in my case) new tricks. Nice write indeed. Keep improving, although you nice enough now. Love Ernestine XXX
I really enjoyed reading this. The last line is so true, staying positive about what you are doing is important. I felt your words. Looking at your work helps my writing, Thank you. Kindest Regards Slim. x.
the problem is when we stop thinking there is room for improvement mary :) nice one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poetic wisdom. Yep! It always hits you as the year is drawing to a close. You start by looking back over the past year, and before you know it, you're in infant school. Lovely piece Mary as always. love Denis Joe XXXXXX