Mary Nagy

Rookie (11-08-1970)

Lifes Little Introspections - Poem by Mary Nagy

The holidays have been a time of looking at my life.
It makes me wonder how I'm doing as a mother and a wife.

I hope I am successful in this most important task.
I know that I have tried my best...... is this all that I can ask?

It makes me think about the times I could have given more.
I have to also focus on our life beyond the door.

I see room for some improvement in this life I call my own.
It's lifes little introspections that helps to see if I have grown.

With each new year that passes I can say life has improved.
It helps when I make sure that negativity is removed


Comments about Lifes Little Introspections by Mary Nagy

  • (12/30/2005 10:39:00 PM)


    You're a positive force, Mary, and I am proud of you! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (12/26/2005 6:16:00 AM)


    I'm always trying Mary, but I suppose you can't teach on old Dog (Bitch in my case) new tricks. Nice write indeed. Keep improving, although you nice enough now. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2005 4:21:00 AM)


    Mary...I really like the sentiment in this poem, but I think most of the lines are too wordy. Take the line, 'With each new year that passes I can say life has improved'
    for instance. It could easily read, 'With each new year life has improved, ' and the line that follows it could also be reduced, retaining its rhyme. I hope this is a helpful suggestion....John
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  • (12/26/2005 4:06:00 AM)


    I really enjoyed reading this.
    The last line is so true, staying positive
    about what you are doing is important.
    I felt your words. Looking at your work
    helps my writing, Thank you.
    Kindest Regards Slim. x.
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  • (12/26/2005 2:35:00 AM)


    the problem is when we stop thinking there is room for improvement mary :) nice one (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2005 12:59:00 AM)


    HI Mary very nice one, have a great one Dave xxx (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2005 9:15:00 PM)


    Welcome back Mary with a very nice poem!
    It's called growth, and it works better without the negativity, as you say.
    Warmly
    Ray
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  • (12/25/2005 8:58:00 PM)


    Poetic wisdom. Yep! It always hits you as the year is drawing to a close. You start by looking back over the past year, and before you know it, you're in infant school.

    Lovely piece Mary as always.

    love

    Denis Joe

    XXXXXX
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 25, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, January 5, 2007


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