Darren jkoeryo

Lifts Up - Poem by Darren jkoeryo

A light thought can lift it up
when no mountain can move
No wind can nor any force
Just a smile by opposite sex

Topic(s) of this poem: body, love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Lifts Up by Darren jkoeryo

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/29/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    Just a smile to move along with life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 2:14:00 PM)

    Light of thought can lift up emotion and affection. Wonderful drafting shared with wise mind...10 (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/22/2015 9:04:00 PM)

    Exactly, unless she is laughing AT you: -)

    Jokes, aside, a well penned poem in just four lines.. Thanks for sharing Darren..

    Cheers :)
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  • Liza Sudina (11/17/2015 5:16:00 AM)

    true only for hetero. ha-ha! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/15/2015 11:48:00 AM)

    Ya and this will work on young and old hearts....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015

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