On Target Poem by Darren jkoeryo

Short and sweet, wisely written poem.............10++

you have expressed the truth very beautifully, well composed poem, thanks for sharing.

Neat poem on target.......adorable.

Only few fortunate find target. You are definite in expression and this is wonderful poem from your nice and wise mind...10

Great work! ! Thanks for sharing.

Very true Darren Thanx for sharing this bravo-worthy poem

"Keep trying until you succeed"!

Brilliant and insightful lines, a witty motivation piece written with conviction...

Thank you very much for visiting my page and reading the poems on Albert Einstein.

Dear Poet Darren, Thank you for this impressive poem of hard work and hope to reach the right target.5 stars