On Target Poem by Darren jkoeryo

On Target

Rating: 4.6

This world is a target board
we all try our luck but hitting a shot
Only few fortunate find target
Struggle is for many more
Keep trying until you succeed.

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
M Asim Nehal 06 November 2015

Short and sweet, wisely written poem.............10++

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Shakil Ahmed 06 November 2015

you have expressed the truth very beautifully, well composed poem, thanks for sharing.

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T Rajan Evol 06 November 2015

Neat poem on target.......adorable.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

Only few fortunate find target. You are definite in expression and this is wonderful poem from your nice and wise mind...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2016

Great work! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 10 July 2021

Brilliant and insightful lines, a witty motivation piece written with conviction...

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Thank you very much for visiting my page and reading the poems on Albert Einstein.

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Dear Poet Darren, Thank you for this impressive poem of hard work and hope to reach the right target.5 stars

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Kenneth Maswabi 21 September 2020

Great words of encouragement...i hope i hit my target today. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2020

A beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.....10+++++++

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